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Condensing ideas

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part II: Learning About How English Works
Connecting & Condensing Ideas
Condensing ideas

Condensing ideas within sentences using a variety of language resources.

| W.5.1 | W.5.2 | W.5.3 | W.5.5 | SL.5.4 | SL.5.6 | L.5.1 | L.5.3 | L.5.6 |
EMERGING
1

Condense clauses in simple ways (e.g., through simple embedded clauses as in, The book is on the desk. The book is mine. -> The book that is on the desk is mine) to create precise and detailed sentences.

EXPANDING
2

Condense clauses in an increasing variety of ways (e.g., through a growing number of types of embedded clauses and other condensing as in, The book is mine. The book is about science. The book is on the desk. -> The science book that's on the desk is mine) to create precise and detailed sentences.

BRIDGING
3

Condense clauses in a variety of ways (e.g., through various types of embedded clauses and some nominalizations as in, They were a very strong army. They had a lot of enemies. They crushed their enemies because they were strong. -> Their strength helped them crush their numerous enemies) to create precise and detailed sentences.

Connecting ideas

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part II: Learning About How English Works
Connecting & Condensing Ideas
Connecting ideas

Connecting ideas within sentences by combining clauses.

| W.5.1 | W.5.2 | W.5.3 | W.5.5 | SL.5.4 | SL.5.6 | L.5.1 | L.5.3 | L.5.6 |
EMERGING
1

Combine clauses in a few basic ways to make connections between and join ideas (e.g. You must X because X) or to provide evidence to support ideas or opinions (e.g., creating compound sentences using and, but, so).

EXPANDING
2

Combine clauses in an increasing variety of ways (e.g., creating compound and complex sentences) to make connections between and join ideas, for example, to express cause/effect (e.g., The deer ran because the mountain lion came), to make a concession (e.g., She studied all night even though she wasn't feeling well), or to provide reasons to support ideas (e.g., X is an extremely good book because ___________).

BRIDGING
3

Combine clauses in a wide variety of ways (e.g., creating compound and complex sentences) to make connections between and join ideas, for example, to express cause/effect (e.g., The deer ran because the mountain lion approached them), to make a concession (e.g., She studied all night even though she wasn't feeling well), to link two ideas that happen at the same time (e.g., The cubs played while their mother hunted), or to provide reasons to support ideas (e.g., The author persuades the reader by _________ ).

Modifying to add details

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part II: Learning About How English Works
Expanding & Enriching Ideas
Modifying to add details

Modifying to add details to provide more information and create precision.

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EMERGING
1

Expand and enrich sentences with adverbials (e.g., adverbs, adverb phrases, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause, and the like) about a familiar activity or process.

EXPANDING
2

Expand and enrich sentences with adverbials (e.g., adverbs, adverb phrases, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause, and the like) about a familiar or new activity or process.

BRIDGING
3

Expand and enrich sentences with adverbials (e.g., adverbs, adverb phrases, prepositional phrases) to provide details (e.g., time, manner, place, cause, and the like) about a variety of familiar and new activities and processes.

Using nouns and noun phrases

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part II: Learning About How English Works
Expanding & Enriching Ideas
Using nouns and noun phrases

Using nouns and noun phrases to expand ideas and provide more detail.

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EMERGING
1

Expand noun phrases in simple ways (e.g., adding an adjective to a noun) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and add details about ideas, people, things, and the like.

EXPANDING
2

Expand noun phrases in a variety of ways (e.g., adding comparative/superlative adjectives to noun phrases or simple clause embedding) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and add details about ideas, people, things, and the like.

BRIDGING
3

Expand noun phrases in an increasing variety of ways (e.g., adding comparative/superlative and general academic adjectives to noun phrases or more complex clause embedding) in order to enrich the meaning of sentences and add details about ideas, people, things, and the like.

Using verbs and verb phrases

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part II: Learning About How English Works
Expanding & Enriching Ideas
Using verbs and verb phrases

Using verbs and verb phrases to create precision and clarity in different text types.

| W.5.5 | SL.5.6 | L.5.1 | L.5.3 | L.5.6 |
EMERGING
1

Use frequently used verbs (e.g., take, like, eat) and various verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) and tenses appropriate to the text type and discipline (e.g., simple past for recounting an experience) on familiar topics.

EXPANDING
2

Use various verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) and tenses appropriate to the task, text type, and discipline (e.g., simple past for recounting an experience, timeless present for a science description) on an increasing variety of topics.

BRIDGING
3

Use various verb types (e.g., doing, saying, being/having, thinking/feeling) and tenses appropriate to the task, text type, and discipline (e.g., timeless present for science description, mixture of past and present for narrative or history explanation) on a variety of topics.

Understanding cohesion

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part II: Learning About How English Works
Structuring Cohesive Texts
Understanding cohesion

Understanding cohesion and how language resources across a text contribute to the way a text unfolds and flows.

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EMERGING
1

a) Apply basic understanding of language resources for referring the reader back or forward in text (e.g., how pronouns refer back to nouns in text) to comprehending texts and writing basic texts.

b) Apply basic understanding of how ideas, events, or reasons are linked throughout a text using a select set of everyday connecting words or phrases (e.g., first/next, at the beginning) to comprehending texts and writing basic texts.

EXPANDING
2

a) Apply growing understanding of language resources for referring the reader back or forward in text (e.g., how pronouns or synonyms refer back to nouns in text) to comprehending texts and writing texts with increasing cohesion.

b) Apply growing understanding of how ideas, events, or reasons are linked throughout a text using a variety of connecting words or phrases (e.g., for example, in the first place, as a result) to comprehending texts and writing texts with increasing cohesion.

BRIDGING
3

a) Apply increasing understanding of language resources for referring the reader back or forward in text (e.g., how pronouns, synonyms, or nominalizations refer back to nouns in text) to comprehending texts and writing cohesive texts.

b) Apply increasing understanding of how ideas, events, or reasons are linked throughout a text using an increasing variety of academic connecting and transitional words or phrases (e.g., consequently, specifically, however) to comprehending text and writing cohesive texts.

Understanding text structure

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part II: Learning About How English Works
Structuring Cohesive Texts
Understanding text structure

Understanding text structure and organization based on purpose, text type, and discipline.

| RL.5.5 | RI.5.5 | W.5.1 | W.5.2 | W.5.3 | W.5.4 | W.5.5 | SL.5.4 |
EMERGING
1

Apply basic understanding of how different text types are organized to express ideas (e.g., how a narrative is organized sequentially with predictable stages versus how opinions/arguments are organized around ideas) to comprehending texts and writing basic texts.

EXPANDING
2

Apply growing understanding of how different text types are organized to express ideas (e.g., how a narrative is organized sequentially with predictable stages versus how opinions/arguments are structured logically around reasons and evidence) to comprehending texts and writing texts with increasing cohesion.

BRIDGING
3

Apply increasing understanding of how different text types are organized to express ideas (e.g., how a historical account is organized chronologically versus how opinions/arguments are structured logically around reasons and evidence) to comprehending texts and writing cohesive texts.

Selecting language resources

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways
Productive (creation of oral presentations and written texts) Speaking/Writing
Selecting language resources

Selecting and applying varied and precise vocabulary and other language resources to effectively convey ideas.

| W.5.4 | W.5.5 | SL.5.4 | SL.4.6 | L.5.1 | L.5.3 | L.5.5 | L.5.6 |
EMERGING
1

a) Use a select number of general academic and domain-specific words to create precision while speaking and writing.

b) Select a few frequently used affixes for accuracy and precision (e.g., She walks, I'm unhappy).

EXPANDING
2

a) Use a growing number of general academic and domain-specific words, synonyms, and antonyms to create precision and shades of meaning while speaking and writing.

b) Select a growing number of frequently used affixes for accuracy and precision (e.g., She walked. He likes . . . , I'm unhappy).

BRIDGING
3

a) Use a wide variety of general academic and domain-specific words, synonyms, antonyms, and figurative language to create precision and shades of meaning while speaking and writing.

b) Select a variety of appropriate affixes for accuracy and precision (e.g., She's walking. I'm uncomfortable. They left reluctantly).

Supporting opinions

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways
Productive (creation of oral presentations and written texts) Speaking/Writing
Supporting opinions

Supporting own opinions and evaluating others’ opinions in speaking and writing.

| W.5.1 | W.5.4 | W.5.9 | W.5.10 | SL.5.4 | SL.5.6 | L.5.1 | L.5.2 | L.5.3 | L.5.6 |
EMERGING
1

a) Support opinions by expressing appropriate/accurate reasons using textual evidence (e.g., referring to text) or relevant background knowledge about content, with substantial support.

b) Express ideas and opinions or temper statements using basic modal expressions (e.g., can, has to, maybe).

EXPANDING
2

a) Support opinions or persuade others by expressing appropriate/accurate reasons using some textual evidence (e.g., paraphrasing facts from a text) or relevant background knowledge about content, with moderate support.

b) Express attitude and opinions or temper statements with familiar modal expressions (e.g., maybe/probably, can/must).

BRIDGING
3

a) Support opinions or persuade others by expressing appropriate/accurate reasons using detailed textual evidence (e.g., quoting the text directly or specific events from text) or relevant background knowledge about content, with mild support.

b) Express attitude and opinions or temper statements with nuanced modal expressions (e.g., probably/certainly, should/would) and phrasing (e.g., In my opinion . . .).

Writing

5th Grade - CA ELD Standard
Part I: Interacting in Meaningful Ways
Productive (creation of oral presentations and written texts) Speaking/Writing
Writing

Writing literary and informational texts to present, describe, and explain ideas and information, using appropriate technology.

| W.5.1 | W.5.2 | W.5.3 | W.5.4 | W.5.5 | W.5.6 | W.5.7 | W.5.8 | W.5.9 | W.5.10 | L.5.1 | L.5.3 | L.5.6 |
EMERGING
1

a) Write short literary and informational texts (e.g., a description of a camel) collaboratively (e.g., joint construction of texts with an adult or with peers) and sometimes independently.

b) Write brief summaries of texts and experiences using complete sentences and key words (e.g., from notes or graphic organizers).

EXPANDING
2

a) Write longer literary and informational texts (e.g., an informative report on different kinds of camels) collaboratively (e.g., joint construction of texts with an adult or with peers) and with increasing independence by using appropriate text organization.

b) Write increasingly concise summaries of texts and experiences using complete sentences and key words (e.g., from notes or graphic organizers).

BRIDGING
3

a) Write longer and more detailed literary and informational texts (e.g., an explanation of how camels survive without water for a long time) collaboratively (e.g., joint construction of texts with an adult or with peers) and independently by using appropriate text organization and growing understanding of register.

b) Write clear and coherent summaries of texts and experiences using complete and concise sentences and key words (e.g. from notes or graphic organizers).

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